Hi Table 26 Groupies, Bert Botta here, Northern California. Here's a post for review. Don't hold back, I'm too old to be offended!"
Mini review 12/04/08
Bert Botta – Adirondacks groupo (Circle of Success)
Main idea: An ad for a men’s motorcycle group
Target group: Baby Boomer male motorcyclists in crisis
Word count: 40
Flesch Kincaid rating: 91.3%
AD: “Hey Guys, if your wife says you need help, come ride with us. It won’t cost you more than a tank of gas and it’ll be the best therapy you ever had!"
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Sorry guys and gals, I didn't know I was supposed to write additional lead text on my
Baby Boomer men's motorcycle group...next time.
Bert
No, you're OK Bert. It's whatever you can come up with in 30 minutes or under.
If it's just a headline that's OK.
Rating is supposed to be an emotional response only.
3
3.1
3.5
Sorry, I didn't see the word "if". Now that I do I revoke my previous score of 1 and give you a 3.
Thanks Karen, I appreciate your feedback. Amazing what a difference a little word can make, eh...
Bert
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